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Monday, March 26, 2007

Critiqued

So I had my blog critiqued. Why? I've seen it on some other blogs and it seemed interesting!

Here is the critique:

"This blog is a real "grab ya by the heart and open your eyes" kinda of blog. Michelle's daughter Kayla has Down Syndrome and her blog is dedicated to raising awareness about Down Syndrome and Michelle's great love for this little princess. I worked with children and adults who have Down Syndrome at one time and my wife currently works with Autistic children, no matter what the child has, one thing is always clear. They are all gifts from God. Michelle's blog is "spot on" in every way and the writing and "story" is captivating. Stop over and say hello. I also would like to mention that Michelle is a consultant for Discovery Toys. Why not have a look there too."

If you would like to see what he has to say about your blog go to Critique My Blog. On the right side under Links just click on Submit Your Blog.

21 comments:

Deb said...

He was right--your story is captivating. I always enjoy visiting. :)

Misslionheart said...

I could have written that! lol

Mike said...

If I were to critique yours (and I'm sorry if this is unsolicited), I'd write: "It's one of those blogs that you'd want your friends to know about."


Mike
http://somethingaboutparenting.typepad.com/

Nisa said...

Yes, he sure was right about your blog. I also like what Mike just wrote. I feel the same.
love, Nisa

Jessica said...

He was right on!!

Jan B said...

I agree too, your blog is captivating. Your daughter looks so much like my little Rachel, it is amazing.

PEA said...

Now there's a critic that has good sense! hehe He's right, your blog personifies your dedication to Kayla and I for one am soooo glad I found you all these months ago:-) xox

Beck said...

Well said and all true! What an excellent and well deserved glowing review!

ChupieandJ'smama said...

He's totally right about your blog :)

Carrie! :o) said...

Ya know, Michelle... I've read ALOT of his reviews and this one is BY FAR the best review and I couldn't agree more! :o)

K.T. said...

That is pretty cool!I dont know if I have the heart to have my blog critiqued....

Linda said...

Couldn't have said it better myself. He does a really good job with these critiques.

Overwhelmed! said...

Interesting. I might have to see what they have to say about my blog. :)

Christina said...

Oh so true :-)
I was also captivated from the first time I read it.

chelle said...

awww what a nice review!
I am way way too chicken. and I just want to be loved :P

Catch said...

He was so correct! Your blog is like a nice cup of tea in an easy chair....relaxing....homey and it makes you feel good! Good job Michelle!

Trace said...

I think he summed it up pretty good! :)

Anonymous said...

I agree with everything he said. You write so beautifully about your little girl.I love reading about all the steps in Kayla's life. Of course I love the videos of her they always brighten up my day!
love ya,mimi

~Melissa~ said...

That is a great critique and completely right!

Sara said...

I love your blog :)

S. said...

I love birth stories! Thanks for sharing, that was awesome! oops, somehow I think I am commenting on the wrong post...but I am lazy so I am leaving it here!